UNDERGROUND ARMY
A few days ago I read an interesting
passage about a historical monument in China. This monument contains thousands
of different kinds of work. This monument is a huge grave made for Chine
emperor Qin Shi Huang.
Qin Shi Huang made so many useful
things. In his time economic develepment accelerate. Also he is the one who
made The Great Wall Of Chine. On the contrast all of these things he was very
cruel and wasteful person. He buried scholars alive just because of they were
opposite his belives. Also he burn books.
His grave started
to building when he alive and after forty years, when he died, the grave was
not finish. 700 thousands men served for build
this.
In the grave there is 8000 soil soldier, (so much more than these are
still underground) with their 520 horses 130 cars, and 150 cavalry. These
soldiers size approximately 180 centimeters. Each of them has different facial
expression. The graves shape like a pyramid. The monument is not fully
unearthed. Around the unearthed grave there are 500 graves, which are still
waiting under soil. The grave accepted as eighth wonder of world, and it is
protected by UNESCO.
The grave was found in 1974 by chance. Farmers saw broken earthenware
pot but this was not interest them. Then an archaeologist saw these broken
parts and so excavations started.
All around the world, too many tourists came to Chine for see this
amazing monument. Also the leaders of different countries want to see the grave
when they come to Chine. If I have such chance, I would like to go and see.
SEDA AĞIRBAŞ
Dear Seda,
YanıtlaSilFirstly, I want to say that your journal is enjoyable. It is also an interesting one. You have mentioned about the topic in a detailed way. I have gained much information thanks to your journal. You have supported your entry by using a suitable video. You have a fluent style. Its being accepted as eight wonder of the world has startled me. You have used language correctly to a great extent. However, you should pay more attention to subject-verb agreement and the use of active-passive clauses. If we have such a chance, we go together, and see. Thanks for your effort :)By Esra Ataman