BLACK
When I was hight school in my last year, our literature teacher found a
film for us and we watched this film together. The films name is “Black”. It is
about a girl who both blind and deaf since she was born. It was an amazing
film.
Can you imagine that she can not hear anything, can not see anything.
She can not speaking, can not walk properly. Her parents do not know how they
train her. They hang a bell her neck for find out where she is, because if she
wants she can be very silent. Then the parents try something different they
find a teacher who is good at this things.
With his come, the girls world changes. First she does not like him even
a little. But then they love each other so much that, they never break with
each other. He learn to her how to speak, not much, but she can say a few
sentences. She learn how to speak with hand signs. She manage so many things,
she gradute from university.
I learn from this film that we should never say impossible. If the girl
whose world is black can do it, if she manage to colouring her black world we
can do same thing by looking eyes easily.
Never say impossible. It could be hard but not impossible.
SEDA AĞIRBAŞ
Dear Seda,
YanıtlaSilI liked your journal. Also, I liked the movie you mentioned. It is a very fascinating plot. Actually, after reading your journal, I decided to watch the movie. You made a good summary, I think. Someone who did not watch it, like me, can easily have a picture in his or her mind. However, I should tell you the mistakes that you did. There were some grammar mistakes. For example, "It is about a girl who 'is' both..." , "They hang a bell her neck 'to' find out..." , "..a teacher who is good at 'these' things." , and "..if she manage's' to 'colour' her black..." You should pay more attention to these mistakes. Apart from these things, I really enjoyed when reading your journal. I'm waiting for your new journals. :)
Hi Seda,
YanıtlaSilfirst of all,I really liked this video.I heard this movie when I read your entry,but based on your writing,I found this movie intriguing and encouraging.I saw a few mistakes in your entry.For instance,in one of your paragraph you say 'with his come',but you should use 'with his coming'.This is only one of your mistakes However,apart from these,I liked your entry and I decided to watch this movie