HIDDEN BEAUTY
There are many beautiful cities in the world. Some of
them have magnificent skyscrapers and have very beautiful and organized configuration.
In these cities there are a lot of thing to do. Everybody is in a hurry. On the
other hand, some of the cities have natural beauty. In such cities there is no
rush but you can be sure if you want there are so many things to do. One of
them and my favourite is my city. This city hides its beauty behind the
mountains. Actually the city is beautiful thanks to its mountains. One part of
the city is full of green forest and when you go the other part you can hear
waves of Black See. When you go higher places it feels like that you can touch the
stars. Yes my city is so close to the sky that first raindrop falls here. I am
talking about Artvin. For some people living in Artvin is challenging. They say
that there is nothing to do in this city. Even to go somewhere to another place
is problem. They are right because everywhere is mountain and our roads are full
off turns. If this is your first time in Artvin your stomach gets sick. J Also distance between districts is much. Living in Artvin
is boring for people who live rush city life. Developed cities have many
opportunities that Artvin has not. If you do not like natural life you will not
love Artvin. In this city foxes or wolves can visit your neighbourhood at
nights. If you are in village beside the foxes or wolves you can visited by
bears and boars. They are trying to steal your potatoes so you should be aware
of such things and you have to be cold-blooded. If you live nature and if you
say I can take care all of these problems and you want to rest yourself head
this is your place. You can do many things. We have a very clean see if you
love swimming. Almost everywhere is picnic area so you can go wherever you
want. You can go Kafkasör upland and you can drink cold spring water. Also you
can see Artvin at the top. I assure you that you cannot forget the scene you
see. Even if you are not thinking about lives in Artvin you should go and see
this place. You can be sure that there is much more scenic beauty that I cannot
write about them.
Dear Seda,
YanıtlaSilI find your writing really sincere and cute :)I know how much you love Artvin. Whenever you talk about it there is a big smile on your face. I liked your writing and enjoyed it. Your writing also have coherence and it is well-organized. However you may say "live in nature" rather than "live nature" All in all I really loved your work.
Thanks :)